Sunday, March 1, 2009

This is a rough draft-let me know what you think!






Sometimes I feel like glass....

Sometimes, broken, splintered, smashing to the floor.

Sometimes, dirty, grimy, nothing can get through.

Sometimes, rain splatters relentless-pounding in my head.

Sometimes, not enough times, clear, clean, everything gets through.

Sometimes the sun shines, warming me, taking away the pane.

Sometimes empty, other times reflective-ringing out my soul.

....sometimes I feel like glass

3 comments:

Lacey Lu said...

I like!!!!...Nice!!! Good Imagery!!
Keep it up!!! ;-) Love ya tons!!
Keep Smilin'!! Life's Gr8!!

Texas Tingey said...

Love it!

Mendoza family said...

I like it for sure!